Research and planning target audience video

This is my target audience videos which gave me feedback on my drafts for my magazine telling me what things are good and maybe some things I could improve on, they said I shouldn't include anything else on my contents page as it would then make it look to packed and congested, they think my title is suitable for a pop magazine as it goes with the genre and said a medium close-up shot will be the best shot type as you will be able to see the expression on my models face and the features more clearly. The colours are appropriate as its a pop theme and the colours I have chosen for my draft relate to this genre and it is what colours most people relate to pop.